“The Crossing”

A Short Suspense Story of Vengeance and Transformation

Sorry, the public free reading period is over. If you’re one of my First Look Readers who hasn’t had a chance to read it yet, please email me and I’ll send you the story.

This story will be included in an upcoming print version of a collection of stories publishing in October, titled NIGHT DESCENDS.

Comments from First Look Readers:

“OOOHH HELL YEAH!!!! Loved it. Awesome!!! Exciting, with unexpected twists and turns.—SPOILER PART OF COMMENT REMOVED — Thanks for this very satisfying story, Dennis, I really enjoyed it!” –Nina Anthonijsz

“Oh man! You really got me with this one. Could not stop reading and had no clue about the twists and turns of the story.” –Susan Lewis

“That’s good. But now I have to know about the white dress! I’m on the edge of my seat. Nice writing. Keep it up. I’m hooked!” –Brenda Church

“Nicely done!” –Dan S.

“I just finished reading it. Love the twist..hehe…in the story. You always have the best surprises!” –Debra Dayton

I’m bound for the broken promise land
To meet my demons and get back my upper hand
Long man can’t catch a soul like mine
Miracles are just too damn hard to find…

Elle King, Ain’t Gonna Drown

The Crossing - Short Fiction by Dennis Lowery

Original photo used for cover base image, by Dan S.

 

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4 thoughts on ““The Crossing”

  1. That’s good. But now I have to know about the white dress! I’m on the edge of my seat.
    Nice writing. Keep it up. I’m hooked

  2. Oh man! You really got me with this one. Could not stop reading and had no clue about the twists and turns of the story.

  3. OOOHH HELL YEAH!!!! Awesome!!! —SPOILER PART OF COMMENT REMOVED —
    Thanks for this very satisfying story, Dennis, I really enjoyed it!!